A New rewrite? : The Little Book of Change

Wow. Artists. I guess you can call me one.

I was cleaning up my spelling and grammar errors for my first draft to go to edit. I had to take a step back and do a second draft. I don’t know if it is me “double guessing”, or I am just inundated with the material. I am considering adding to some of my chapters. As I was reading them, I felt that some of the things I explain, like mental illness, etc, are a little light. I also feel that I make a few big leaps from one paragraph to another. This is in part to trying to keep this book short and to the point, But I think I may have to add a few more pages to connect things a little better.

I wished I could share it all with you, but then that would be putting out the book before it is published.

These are some of the things that I think I am seeing.

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